Monday, August 31, 2015
Purpose and Audience
In the speeches ,"This is Water" by David Foster Wallace, and ,"Morrison Nobel Lecture” by Toni Morrison, the purpose and audience are reflected through the tone and vocabulary that the authors uses. In “This is Water” the author’s target audience is to a group of graduating college students, so he talks about life as an adult and how we need to be “aware of our simple surroundings”. Because Wallace is addressing college graduates, his tone and vocabulary is casual, so that his audience can grab the information without thinking too much about it. Wallace uses terms like “frustrating crap” and phrases like “fat, dead-eyed, over-made-lady” to describe certain situations which would not be normally used in a formal speech. “Morrison Nobel Lecture” on the other hand had a more serious tone. The target audience is more towards serious people who are there to hear a sophisticated speech. Morrison’s speech tells a story, but instead of giving advice on life, Morrison talks about the importance of language and how important it is that we prevent it from going “dead”. Morrison’s speech is also to show the audience that it was possible for her to win the Nobel Prize. Both authors’ speeches are written to cater to their specific audience. Whether it’s to a group of college students about to head into the real world, or to a large group of people who are just there to listen to someone’s prize speech. Both authors’ speeches reflected the certain style to fit their audience.
Compare and Contrast
These speeches are alike being that they are speaking widely and universally
on a mature level to large audience’s. They are also very different at the same
time. For example, In "This is Water" Wallace was trying to show
graduates who are about to be hit with reality what to expect out of the world.
He wanted to teach them ways to make it, being out in the adult world, and also
how to live happily. In "Nobel Lecture," Morrison reflects back on
times of hardship, slavery, and desperate times. It is geared towards a crowd
of younger adults and how we must value our ancestors’ history and hardships,
and keep on spreading the love of language. Theses speeches each have different tones and attitudes. In "Nobel Lecture," it was said
many times that we must fight for our language, for its one of the few ways we
can express culture, history, or even just ourselves. Language is humans mark on the world, without language we the people have nothing. In, “This is Water,”
Wallace points out how you have to look past things, and let go. Your life will
be happier and you will enjoy everyday more than the last. Just as Morrison was talking about in “Nobel Lecture,” it talks about young kids striving to be the best they
can be, by understanding their history and why things happened the way they
did. They want to carry on the legacy of language, the correct way. These speeches are
alike by taking advice from your elders and listening to some pretty serious thing and carrying them on with you for the rest of your life.
Language vs. Thoughts
If these two authors (Morrison and Wallace) had a nice night
out to talk to each other in the same sense they wrote these pieces in, they
might talk about how their writings are similar in talking about how to use your power. Morrison would talk about and tell you there are
ways you can use your language in a more powerful way, instead of abusing the
language that you should embrace it and use it to the fullest of your
abilities.
Wallace would talk about how your mind thinks in so many
different ways but that we are in a default-setting that is set to think in a “negative
mindset” sort to speak. He says specifically that, ”…Everything in my own
immediate experience supports my deep belief that I am the absolute center of
the universe, the realest, most vivid and important person in existence.” (pg.
2) He would say the way you think about things could be powerful thoughts.
If they were to exchange each others ideas to one another, Morrison
would express that you need to use your thoughts to use and exploit your vocabulary
and language to the fullest power of your ability. Wallace would agree saying the
way you think about any given situation would effect the type of language you plan
on using to describe the event. Also saying that if you think about other
people, then maybe you could or would be more understanding to a negative outcome
you weren’t happy with, therefore giving you a positive mind.
Coffee!
I believe that if the Narrator's sat down and discussed their pieces with one another they would agree to a certain extent because they both expressed a personal opinion and or experience. Although both are different in different ways such as time period and personal experience. they both sought out to educate. to teach a lesson better yet to show the importance of words. I strongly believe that both narrators would share stories and their common goals which may turn out to be the same. I believe that although one is based on personal struggle and the other is based on struggles as a race both outline the importance of positivity and the effects of negativity. Both articles take a common problem and incorporate it into their own personal story. Although they might have a little conflict deciding what coffee is best. Their stories both outline some important key factors such as words, connotations, human impact and the importance of not judging without prior knowledge of that person. Both stories had a common goal of self realization. in which I believe both accomplished. So in conclusion I believe that they would both have a nice discussion on the roots of the ideas and their responses. they might even drop a flame Speech together who knows!
compare and contrast
The speeches "This is Water" and "Morrison Nobel Lecture” are very similar, but also have many differences. Both are trying to make the reader think about things that they usually don't and learn a lesson from this. However, the way each speaker goes about this is very different. Morrison uses the wisdom of an old lady and Wallace makes it very clear from the beginning that they are neither old nor wise and just wants to share what they have learned. Both speeches also use what seem to be simple stories on the outside to make the reader think about a deeper meaning on the inside. They use these seemingly insignificant stories to pull us in and make us think about things that we normally wouldn't if it was just told to us. Although theses stories have many similarities, they are also quite different. For example, in "Morrison Nobel Lecture” just one story is told throughout the speech. In "This is Water” Wallace told one story to open and close their speech. They also told one other story in the middle of their speech to help explain the point they were trying to get across to the audience. Another example of how they differ is that in "Morrison Nobel Lecture" Morrison never really gives the audience an exact idea that they were trying to get across so it gives you the freedom to interpret the meaning in many different ways. In "This is Water" Wallace is very straight forward and clear when stating what they want their audience to get out of their speech and leaves almost no room for interpretation.
comparing speeches
In the speeches “Morrison Noble Lecture” and “This is Water” had similarities
as well as differences. A major comparison between them was that they both emphasize
you have the choice to decide an outcome of something. Furthermore more in “Morrison
Noble Lecture” the old lady said “I don't know whether the bird you are holding
is dead or alive, but what I do know is that it is in your hands. It is in your
hands” which meant that young people have the power to decide if a language is
dead or not. “This is Water” explains that we can chose to use our default-settings
or have different mind as we approach everyday situations. However on the other
hand “This is Water” is more self-centered and deals with problems that someone
might have every day, in addition it talks about how one would usually approach
a situation after a long day, or how you can think differently in a situation
so it is not all about yourself. The “Morrison of Noble Lecture it seem to me
that you would need more than one person to decide if a language dies or not
because everybody communicates with each other through the art of language.
differing purposes and audiences
While Morrison’s speech was about children trying to obtain
wisdom from an elderly women, the audience she was directing it towards was
that of other Nobel Prize winners and her peers. When writing her speech she
was expecting her audience to interpret it at a much higher level then Wallace
did with his audience and to get across a message that she herself already knew.
In Morrison’s speech she discusses how if new generations let the languages of
the past fall to the wayside we as a society will lose a key part of who we
are, that if this language is lost society will forget where it has come from
and not value all the lessons learned along the way. Wallace on the other hand
intended to get a message across to his audience of graduating seniors. This
can be seen in the way in which he wrote his speech, by giving a scenario that
is easily relatable and thought provoking. Wallace intended for his audience to
come away with the feeling that they do not have to conform to a definition
their society has given them. That they may look at the world in any way they
see fit, but, he does warn that not everyone may agree with how they view the
world be it because of religion, social status, or how important monetary
wealth is to them. Unlike Morrison, Wallace was incredibly blunt with his
message and had to be to truly have his audience understand him.
Differing Audiences
With the two essays being speeches, audience has a big
impact on the way they were worded and spoken. Wallace’s speech was to a class
of graduating seniors. When he presented the speech, he was much more personal
even though he was blunt in what he was telling his audience. If he would have
presented his speech the way Morrison presented hers he would have lost his
audience since it really would have not meant much to them. To connect to the
audience, he connected his speech to a life story that would be important toe
the graduates in years to follow their special day. Morrison’s speech however
had a much more mature audience, and her speech was a little more complex. When
you give a speech about language and fill it with examples from the world, younger
people would not understand where the idea is formed from. Giving a Nobel
commencement speech, you have a standard to uphold. Wallace was there to give a
lesson to his audience, Morrison was there to prove a point in which she had
reached through study. Both essays where thought provoking in their own ways,
and even though they were given to different audiences, they were presenting a
point in which both audiences could connect with.
Sunday, August 30, 2015
Compare and Contrast
The two speeches "This is Water" and "The Nobel Lecture" are strong pieces of literature on how we each perceive life and the world even though they had different purposes to which it was written for.
Both speeches were similar by showing how and why it is that we think in certain ways we are used to and how we can see the world in a more positive way. The authors also explain that we must be knowledgeable in order to see that it is important to respect and understand where others come from and to know why people are the way that they are before making any negative assumptions about them.
Some of the differences in the speech, "Noble Lecture", is that it was mainly about spoken language and why it is important what we say because words can cause damage and lead to racism and hate like it has in the past. In the passage, "This is Water", the focus was portrayed on everyone having their own self-centered universe and that we must be aware of this so we aren't cynical thinkers and that we need to understand that you aren't the only one with problems and that everyone else in this world is put in a different situation than what you are in.
Compare and Contrast both speeches
In both speeches of “This Is Water” and “Morrison Nobel
Lecture”, authors talk about one’s perspective. In “Morrison Nobel Lecture”,
the author discussions the young people’s perspective toward life versus a
blind old woman’s. While in “This Is Water”, the author points out you view
life by your own thoughts and opinions. Both speeches are similar by making a
point clear of life being viewed in one’s eyes. “This Is Water” used the
grocery store as an example of getting flustered with a grumpy mother. The author
pointed out that, one may keep calm because they think of the woman’s issues of
why she’ll be yelling at her child while another simply becomes bothers. And in
“Morrison Nobel Lecture”, the author writes about a blind woman having her own
interruptions and making life her own because she can’t see what everyone else
can. The dead bird to young people is a simple dead bird while to the old,
blind woman, it is an example of mockery toward her language. These speeches
are also different by the way they make their point out. In “Morrison Nobel
Lecture”, the author makes her point of perspective out with the use of
language from a person with a disability, making it their own way of life. In
“This Is Water”, the author differs by using life examples to make their point
clear. The author uses the grocery store and a work day frustration as their
point of perspective.
David Foster Wallace and Toni Morrison's discussion over dinner
If Toni Morrison and David Foster Wallace were to sit down
and have dinner with each other the conversation would be interesting as they
both see life in different ways. Toni Morrison believes language is the most
important factor in life today as David Foster Wallace believes life is about
simple awareness. I think Morrison and Wallace would both agree and disagree
over topics. As they both imply that one is in control of their own thoughts,
Wallace goes a little deeper into that topic and says you have to be aware of
what is always around us in order to be in control of what you think about. For
most of us live day by day as a motion, not a picture. Morrison and Wallace
would both agree that when you don’t exercise a part of your brain, whether it
is language or awareness, it will die. According to Wallace, if you worship
other things, you will slip into your “default settings” and no longer be free
of fear, anger and frustration. As Morrison believes if you aren’t open to new
ideas, language will eventually die from disuse, carelessness, etc. Both
believe there is meaning to life and if we don’t soon become aware of these
important contributions, they will die and this worried them. The moral I pulled
from both of the speeches is that if you live day by day without looking
closely at what is right in front of you, you will live a scripted life instead
of shaping your own journey.
Why and What is different
In
creating a speech, it is directly written to appeal the audience; whoever that
may be. The importance of the audience will play a significant role in the authors dialect, presentation and content
of their speech. As "This is Water" was a commencement speech spoken
to graduates entering the real world, it was molded by what the graduates can
expect in their future. Throughout this speech, Wallace uses colloquial
language to connect with the younger audience. In doing so, she can evoke
emotion, imagination and engage the audience into really digesting her words instead of just listening.
In comparison to "This is Water," Morrison's lecture, was immensely
formal in language. Hence the difference in titling of the two speeches, one is
labeled a “lecture” as the other is given a more thought-provoking, less black
and white, title. This alone can alert the reader in how the two essays
difference from each other. Morrison’s lecture was strictly written to receive
a very respected award, therefore was written to appeal a formal audience, and
to commemorate thanks. On the
other hand, “This is Water,” was not written for a ridged audience, it was
written for an audience who needed encouraging, nonetheless, inspiration. This
essay was written to be felt by the heart, and to stay in the back of the minds of
those graduating. The very difference in these two essays is the attitude the
authors are gaining to receive from their audiences through their depicted language.
"This is Water" and "Morrison Nobel Lecture" Comparison
In
comparing “This is Water” and “Morrison Nobel Lecture” there were many similarities
and differences. Both speeches talk about being responsible for your own actions
and thoughts. In the “Morrison Nobel Lecture”, Morrison is talking about how
the children just asked the wise blind old woman if the bird in their hands was
dead or alive and the old woman tells them that whether the bird is alive or
dead it is there responsible for what has happened to it or what will happen to
it. Wallace, the author of “This is Water”, says that people need to learn how
to exercise control over what they think about because they are responsible for
how they think. Morrison and Wallace also agree that how you think and what you
say can change things in your life. Morrison mentions that when that when a
language dies that it is because the people who use it. Wallace says that changing
our thoughts to not think about the “petty frustrating crap”, would make life more
enjoyable. Morrison and Wallace disagree when it comes to education. Morrison
says that sometimes the education that is given is not education at all.
Wallace says that education gives you the knowledge to pay attention and have awareness
of what is going on.
Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Welcome to our class blog!
This will be our class blog for the semester. You should have already
received an invitation for how to join this blog as an author. You can
find instructions on TRACS for setting up your account as well as instructions for how to post a blog and how to comment.
If you have any questions, feel free to email me at shilohbooker@txstate.edu.
On
days when a reading has been assigned, you are expected to come to class
prepared to engage in a conversation with the text and your peers. To help you
prepare for these conversations, I will post reading questions to TRACS under
the assignments tab. You will be expected to respond to these questions with
either a blog entry or a blog comment. Your assigned peer group’s schedule will
dictate whether you are responsible for a full blog entry or only a blog
comment. The peer group that has been assigned to lead discussion for the day
will responsible for posting that week’s blog entries, while all other peer
groups are responsible for responding with blog comments. Though these grades
are largely for completion, additional points may be gained by more thorough
and thoughtful responses, and points may be deducted for incomplete or sloppy
work or for work that shows little to no engagement with the text.
Blog
Entries must be a minimum of 250 words. They must be posted by midnight
preceding class. Blog comments must be a minimum of 150 words, and they must be
posted by class time the day the reading is due. Blog entries and comments will
make up a significant portion of the Homework grade. In order to receive full
credit for these assignments, blog entries and comments must be posted to the
class blog by their deadline as well as
printed out in hard copy form to
bring to class.
If you have any questions, feel free to email me at shilohbooker@txstate.edu.
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